Lucy- 1st Hair Practice on Model

This was my first attempt at practicing my final hair design on my model. As seen from the pictures I clearly need more practice. Looking at the middle parting it is not straight at all. It has to be as straight as possible as it was like that during the nineteenth century. I also have to make sure that all the sectioning I do has equal parts of hair in order for the loops to be equal. Looking at the loops they look neat however they do not look equal in texture and the part where the loop drops.

My model's hair is short and as seen in the picture it does not go over the bun. I need to sort this out as it will not be the right thing to do in the final assessment. I was not happy with the bun as it hasn't formed the round shape but looks like two braids folding into each other. Overall I was not pleased with how this trail came out and I need to practice the design more to get it right for the final continuity assessment.